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Post by Leon Sudeki on Nov 19, 2005 1:01:55 GMT -5
Name: Leon Sudeki Nicknames: The Lightning Strike.. Race:Human Class: Soldier Age: 19 Weight: 130 Height: 5'9" Build: Light build Eye color: Blue Hair: Short spikey blond hair. Leon wears it just anyway. Habits: Drinking, gambling Personality: Happy go lucky and bases most everything off of luck. Appearance: Hobbies: Drinking, gambling and betting with baeutiful girls. History: (geh give me time to rethink this.) Weapons: Long Spear Gears: 1Hi-potion, 2 potions and 1 Elixer. Skills/Spells/Limit Break: Limit Break: High Jump: He jumps high into the air and comes down on the target with his spear. Fighting Style:N/A Strengths: Leon is goood attacking with his spear. He doesn't get angry easy. Very lucky. Weaknesses: Leon has a bad time defending. He is very slopy and isn't easy to get along with. The only reason Kaze beat you is because he had less to say.
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Post by Kaze on Nov 19, 2005 1:30:22 GMT -5
Shinra is gone. An it needs to be more detailed. Some goes for the other parts. Look at the other bios
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Post by Chiyuki on Nov 19, 2005 1:30:49 GMT -5
Hmm ... Need quite a bit of work in some areas.
Expand your strengths and weaknesses and add in mroe details please. Also, you could not have been in Shinra before because it was destroyed 250 years ago (refer to story of the board ^^) so please change accordingly as well.
As for your skill/spell/Limit Break. Just wondering, is that High Jump a skill or a Limit Break. And just to make sure you know, you can have three skills/spells altogether at first, and one limit break, so altogether four things.
Oh .. and please try to make your history a bit longer? Thanks.
EDIT: >.> argh, Kaze you beat me to it. ==;
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Post by Syler Darkon on Nov 19, 2005 2:15:37 GMT -5
Dude, you need more detail. Look at the other bios for a clue. Adding one line don't do crap.
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